Raeliana at the Duke's Mansion (Simuldub), Season 1

Original: "During the summer holiday, my family and I went on a road trip to the Grand Canyon. The journey was long, but the scenic views along the way made it worth it. As we approached the majestic canyon, we couldn't believe the sheer size and beauty of it. We spent the entire day exploring the different lookout points and taking in the breathtaking landscapes. It was a truly unforgettable experience for all of us."

Revised: "Over the summer holiday, my family and I took a road trip to the Grand Canyon. Despite the long journey, the beautiful scenery along the way made it all worthwhile. When we finally reached the magnificent canyon, we were astonished by its sheer size and beauty. We spent the entire day exploring various lookout points and marveling at the stunning landscapes. It was an absolutely unforgettable experience for each of us."

Original: "After months of planning and anticipation, I finally went on my dream vacation to Paris. It exceeded all of my expectations - the Eiffel Tower, the Louvre Museum, and the charming streets filled with cafes and bakeries. I also had the opportunity to try authentic French cuisine, and it was simply exquisite. I fell in love with the city and can't wait to go back."

Revised: "After months of planning and looking forward to it, I was finally able to go on my dream vacation to Paris. It surpassed all of my expectations - from the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre Museum to the delightful streets lined with cafes and bakeries. I even had the chance to sample authentic French cuisine, and it was truly delightful. I completely fell in love with the city and am already looking forward to returning."

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